Does look good, congrats on the first brisket. Good lookin' brisket for California
Glad to help with the photos, I edited your post to fix a couple of broken links.
Couple of questions, was this a full brisket? You didn't provide details of the cook, such as size of the brisket, time, temp, that would help the next newbie.
The reason I ask is that the cut meat in the one photo either 1) looks like it's from the deckle (the fatter piece usually on top) or it might have been cut with the grain (did you cut it cross grain?)